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Dr. Green and Les: A Small Screen 4-Koma

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DR. GREEN AND LES SAFER
"A Small Screen 4-Koma"
by Jimmy Dimples

PANEL 1

Two-shot of Dr. Eaton Green looking over at Les Safer, who's squinting at his smartphone.

1. DR. GREEN:  What's caught your interest, Les?

2. LES:  I'm watching Boom! and Are You Smarter Than a 5th Grader?


PANEL 2

Dr. Green furrows his brow in concern for Les.  Les looks up and gives Dr. Green full attention.

3. DR. GREEN:  Shouldn't you watch that on a full sized telly or computer monitor?  

4. DR. GREEN.  That small Squintyvision screen must be agony on your eyes.

PANEL 3

Les cracks a smile.  Dr. Green keeps a poker face.

5. LES:  Well, you, Mom and Dad always tell me I should watch less television!

PANEL 4

Dr. Green simply turns to leave.  Les looks on in inquiry.

6. LES:  Where are you going, Doctor?

7. DR. GREEN:  To the tool shed, then Mr. Dimples' laptop.

8. DR. GREEN:  I'm going to hit any key to continue.  With a 20 lb. sledgehammer.


END!
Would you believe me if I said I cranked this script out in less than a half hour?

DR. GREEN: "Yes.  I would."

LES:  "Special thanks :sarcasm: to :icondavidcmatthews: for inspiring Jimmy with this."
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tbolt's avatar
Heh, egad =^^=